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The-Mercenary

22 Audio Reviews

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Better Flow

this one had a better flow, and seemed to accomplish what you set out to do better than the "Deep in the woods." I still think you can add more instruments and give this more depth. Its good, but it feels empty.

Calamaistr responds:

The deeper woods is pretty much to set a tone, this album isnt really made as individual 'tracks. Its all atmospheric and every track contains atleast something of the other wether it be the instruments, a melody or the tone. :) Hope this helps.

Thanks for the review mate.

Its alright...but

The chord progression changes too fast at the beginning, and it doesnt sound quiet right. Either change the last chord, or invert it or something to get it to flow better, or add a more contrasting melody to make it flow better. It got more interesting in the second half, but the intro/first half needs to change.

Calamaistr responds:

no it doesnt.

This is awesome

definitely one badass song. good job

CandySoup responds:

Badass review there man!

Awesome!!!

Man, usually the songs on here are Okay, but this one is just badass! You have inspired me to write better music.

Amazing!!

Dude, all of your stuff is mind blowing. You should be making these for movies.

Awsome

Cool song man. What do you use to record your guitar? Everytime I hook mine up to my pc it sounds a lot shittier than through the amp.

THE BEST

its good, but whats up with you and bees?

Perfect!!

This kinda reminds of the songs from the ratchet and clank games. Very nice

Waterflame responds:

:D those games rox, altho i never owned one, i have played them alot. actually i made a song never submitted called "metropolis station" with great inspiration from that game :)

Awsome Song

Great song dude, I want to check with you if we can use this in a game we're making. We havnt decided on anything yet, but we're mostly likely gonna make a profit off the game. Can we use your song for free, we'll give you full credit and a link back to your site if you have one.

EckHart responds:

Hey, thanks alot man! I really appreciate it. Be my guest to use the song, just give full credit to Broken Souls. We don't have a site that's up and running right now, but just give credit to our band, Broken Souls, and you're more than welcome. Thanks again!

SWEET!

Dude! this song is awsome! It has that certain feel to it, I forgot what song it was, but it reminds of a song I heard.

Such cringe, much wow!

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